cyborgs (n00b)

[blam]

hi
I'm new here
and I'm 15 years old
not a pro or something, so please be nice:(

this is a drawing I made, somebody is going to color it
because I suck in coloring
they are cyborgs, it was made for a contest, and the theme was cyborgs

please forgive me for my crappy english:D

http://members.lycos.nl/ziggyziggy/CYBORG.jpg

[Tayama]

You know i like it man :D

I only have some problems with the perspecitive of the gun ,from the guy on the left, it seems a little off.

But i really dig your style :)

[jayceel]

Good lines, good composition and only 15, great work

JayCeeL

[brads3d]

I'm a little obsessive but, I noticed the guy and girl have the same nose, and it bugs me. Unless they are cyborgs built with the same features intentionally, you should make sure you don't reuse elements in an image.
Aside from that, it looks like you are developing a nice style.

[Grooveholmes]

:rolleyes:

[Payback]

Maybe they have the same nose-manufacturer? :D

[blam]

exactly;)

thanks for the comments people

I will work on the noses