Daredevil and Wolverine sequentials...

[kong]

Daredevil and Wolverine sequentials...
I'm still working out the kinks in my finished penciling technique....
I got some words for this so stay tuned... for the update with words.. :slap:
http://kong.5u.com/images/sketches/march/page1.gif
http://kong.5u.com/images/sketches/march/page2.gif
http://kong.5u.com/images/sketches/march/page3.gif

[Infinit]

TOO many close ups imo
they take away evey movement and make it hard to read

[Ifman1]

On page 2, frame 2, the perspective is a little wonky on the building. And you might want to go for some more dynamic shots, like a bird or bugs eye view. Oh, and an opening shot that sets the scene would probably help. Your style is nice, I like the cartoony look with the big chins. American Manga or something. Good Stuff.

[dogfood]

When I look at the second and last panels on page one, I feel that they're using the same actor to play both heroes. The leaping and what not on page three are also not looking terribly super-heroic.

Nice line work, thoug.