PDA

View Full Version : smoking goblin

saz
February 28th, 2006, 07:50 AM
heya, this is a painting for a metal band I am designing for, any crits will be very welcome.
All done in photoshop with a few touch ups done in painter.thankyou. :teeth:
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a247/marktompkins/brothersgrimmer2.jpg
Wilhelm87
February 28th, 2006, 07:57 AM
It looks pretty good, but I think it's a little too blurry. And to be honest, it looks more like an orc than a goblin, goblins are supposed to be a little smaller (and not so "humanoid" faces) i think.

Maybe you could add some texture to his forehead too, it looks a little flat is it is right now. Sry if I criticize it too much, I'm just trying to help. :teeth:
veedubb
March 3rd, 2006, 03:57 PM
quite blurry
Chai-Chang
March 3rd, 2006, 04:03 PM
That's crazy! I like the mouth and cigar area best...
Vmax
March 4th, 2006, 10:57 AM
I like the green background and the outline...you should sharpen the goblin a little more though.
sadgas
March 4th, 2006, 05:53 PM
it looks like human,not like a goblin....
it's a good drawing,but needs more contrasts..
see mark gibbons drawings for inspiration(best warhammer ilustrator)
respekts!
saz
March 5th, 2006, 02:29 PM
thanks folks, yeah I need to do some more work on it, i did origianlly put more detail and sharpness to it, but it seemed a bit wrong to me at the time, so for some reason I went over it with a blender brush to soften it, but yes I do agree I need to put the detail back in.