Power armor with shank

[Wafflehouseninja]

Im going to be coloring this and wanted some feed back on the line work befor i started in on it.Crits more than welcome
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v412/Waffleninja/sifiarmor01.jpg
note:word bubble and text will not be in finished work....maybe.

[Razvan]

*lol* hee hee... What a rock'n-jock'n-govey-cool pic! ^_~

May you pencil bring forth eye candy-
Razvan

[Infinit]

The only thing to crit is that I really can`t see what this thing on his back should be (would be cool if you clear this)

cool text AND cool pose

[Dstudio]

Cant complain to much, cant wait to see your coolouring skills :)

[Ramzeal]

I will say try to vary your lines thickness, so we can already ave a feel of deapt. LIke the foreground food should ave thicker lines. Silhouette look good to me.