The first: my first post here

[Cashmere]

Hi, this is my first work. Your advices and critics are welcome!!
Thanks!

http://digilander.libero.it/tuttobianco/modella2.jpg

:rolleyes:

[behemot5]

perhaps could you increase contrast in this pic???? and include the outlines to the shadows ????

[behemot5]

this is a good pic and i think you must search Kchen's sketches on conceptart...look them ... they are very interesting...

[marc_taro]

I like the detail on the lower eyelids...I don't know if thi sis intentional, but to me it creates an interesting focused but slighly squinted expression that make her look a bit guarded...neat portrait...

~mth

[dajovion]

I agree with behemot5. I like the drawing a lot, but I think it needs a larger range of contrast. More darks, more greys, more white highlights. It's definitely coming along well though. Keep up the good work.

[Cashmere]

>behemot5: perhaps could you increase contrast in this pic????
>dajovion: More darks, more greys, more white highlights.

Ok. In this pic i've focused my work on the eyes, My next step is build a new picture based on the lights and shadows.

>behemot5: i think you must search Kchen's sketches

Thank's, it's very interesting.

> marc_taro: the lower eyelids...I don't know if this is intentional...

In this picture, the eyes was my target.... the "look" in general.

>behemot5: this is a good pic
>marc_taro: I like the detail on the lower eyelids...
>dajovion: Keep up the good work.

I'm happy you like it!
I need this forum. It is an open book!

[Cashmere]

Here are some sketches I've done to study the eyes.

http://digilander.libero.it/tuttobianco/occhi.jpg

[Puddnhead]

did you trace the drawing of the girls head?

[Cashmere]

Well, for example, those are the eyes...

http://digilander.libero.it/tuttobianco/eyes1.jpg

and now i'm going to draw the head :bash: .....work in progress...

[Cashmere]

Done !
How do you like it? I don't know if it seem accurate. Perhaps the head is too small or not well-proportioned. The hair-style is ok.
I would like to improve my use of tone, light and shadow...
Critics are very very welcome!


http://digilander.libero.it/tuttobianco/head2.jpg