I am wondering...what are You think about that?

[nail85]

http://phpfox.conceptart.org/gallery/I/2005/01/01/996.jpg

SO...It's my first post on this forum and I am wondering what do you think about my works, beacuse in my strange country ( belive me - it's strange) it isn't to get a job as an ilustrator, concept art designer, or somebody like that(specially for 20 year old artist :P) so I just want to know - is't that possible for me to get work with things like that? how do you think?

[hp]

the overall image is good, esp the colors and lighting and the face.

there however is a big contrast between the face/upper torso and the rest of image which means one of two things. you either referenced heavily from/copied some photos, or you just got lazy and didn't bother to finish the rest. i'm not accusing you of anything, i'm just saying.

i think if you make the rest of the image (especially the background) as good as the face, then you'll be set ^^

[guggemmaneuver]

Very good and impressive image... (and welcome to conceptart.org too! :) )
though hpslashluvr brings up a good point... The referenced-ness of it is heightened by the fact that her pose and hot body look straight out of the centerfold, (in my opinion) and thus the picture doesn't make so much sense... Frankly it looks like the robot is going to get her and she's letting out some lusty sigh.

Tits-i'm hooked and i can't stop staring

joel

[N D Hill]

Well, I love the composition, face of the character, color and lighting scheme. You have a great start there. However, there are glaring issues to be worked out. Anatomically, the figure is hard to make sense of. You have this great head, but everything around that seems disjointed and disproportionate. The skeleton and musculature just don’t jive well for me. Basically, I was having trouble visualizing where and how you have your shoulders connected and in relative scale to the ribcage, those upper-arms are just way too long. There are some issues with the hips and waste and musculature as well so I did a paintover to better illustrate my point.

http://blackwash-studio.com/img/996-1.jpg

The background doesn’t seem finished either. The muddiness of the brush work is a detractor but mainly the fact that it seems as if your robot on the right, and the buildings on the left are on two different ground plains. One being straight and the other being skewed diagonally. All in all, I’m left wanting some more finished rendering. As for as values are concerned, the objects in the space seem very flat as there’s little tonal variation that sets some buildings as being closer and others as being further away.

You have a great concept; very reminiscent of Louis Royo’s stuff, but it could definitely be pushed further. I hope that helps.

[Bad Brownie]

yea, I like exo's draw-over...I was going to say that her waist is WAY too small. Doesn't look feasible, particularly right next to those boobs. Gotta support the upper mass and all. ; )

[Kresh]

all your base are belong to us ha-ha-ha-ha.

[Izi]

Great idea! Combat-zone hooker!

What country are you from? You should move to the United States. We have guns and booze and firetrucks.

[Kresh]

i forgot to say that this looks good so far. Although i am having trouble what your trying to tell in this picture. But who needs a story when you got boobs right in your face. Anatomy issues have been addressed so far. Normally the width of the hips should be bigger than the head and try not to go to skinny on the stomach.

[nail85]

http://phpfox.conceptart.org/gallery/I/2005/01/01/1056.jpg
Thank You for your critique ...but You know , normal, I don't have anything to say when I'm painting things like this right here(mech commander). It's simple - I want to paint and I'm painting, and when I'm making illustrations I'm deforming my womens( big hed, buffy haircut, small butt)...

But when I want to say something by my work I'm taking oil paintings and make something like "red act"

oilpaint on canvas 130x130