Finished illustration: pen and ink

[Tomoran]

Finished illustration for the short story "God Doesn't Follow You Into the Bathroom".

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y211/Tomoran/BATHROOMIllo.jpg

[mert_yavasca]

Nice idea :) But there are some problems in composition or I think so..
For example, floor and wall tiles are looking like different from each other at the middle of composition. Okay, there is a light source but tiles seems different colours. About girl, up from bel has less problem then below. Clothes are good.
Keep posting

[Geophillyx]

hahaha im very curious about what shes holdign in her hand, where can i read this short story? :P

[Tomoran]

The short story will appear in Chainsaw Magazine #2.

Thanks for the feedback, guys. Mert, I see what you're saying about the floor tiles. I'm going to go through and color the lines between them solid black.

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