comments on tchnical problems are welcome

[behemot5]

this is a drawing i drawn when i was boring can i have any comment on technical problems???http://thumbs.deviantart.com/300W-96A096/large/indyart/indymisc/monamourestunmort.jpg ..... the same pic but larger bigger picture (http://www.deviantart.com/view/1771242)

[behemot5]

is it without problems?

[behemot5]

no response certainly mean i did a very poor drawing.... i try to do better next time...
i don't understand what are the reasons i drawn boring pic ??? anatomic mistakes?? b&w? work without models??? bad composition???

[EVIL]

well.. people on this board dont respond right away. they are very busy and mostly view the threads from the realy good artists around here first, so be patience.

your drawing is very nice, I dont see any anatomical errors
thats the only thing I can say. I am not so good in judging compositions etc.
I think you should use someone or yourself as a refrence. Go stand in the positon you want and let someone take a picture (with a digital camera is the fastest way.)

and please, dont post 3 times in a row asking for replies. this way people moslty ignore you untill you go away.

well.. I hope to see your creativity grow on this board. so please provide more of your art as time goes by