Batman: First Night Out

[Joebo]

Finished off this pic a while ago. Critique more then welcome!

http://www.willdrawforfood.com/BatmanFirstNightOut4.jpg

[Zeichentier]

i think the face is a lil too big - or the arms a lil too small for a batman...
plus the abdominal muscles look sorta like testicles... no offence, there. just something awkward on the shadow rendering...
so much for my critics.
a suggestion: how bout using some colored lightning on the figure?

cheers
n keep it up!

[thebluepuppy]

i would add a more dynaim pose because front on shots are kind of boring. also the maybe some more color. it seems really desaturated. technically it looks alright but add more fliar to it. add something unique to it that makes it rendering of batman done by you. looks to run of the mill. keep the drawing up!!!

puppy

[babyPuncher]

hahaha testicles.. okay anyways yeah the arms seem way too thin where they start to blend into the pecs and shoulder. THe mask shouldn't be in such a position as to look like it is already on a head. THe lines in some areas are way too hard and crisp when they should blend and flow .. and last but not least are the legs.. there just lookin too small and flat.. sorry i hope this helps some

[Joebo]

Thanks so much everyone for the critiques....needed them big time. Back to the drawing board

[WinglessXAngel]

i dont understand how the wrinkles would be on his right abs like they are. . . . .

the light sourece is pretty well done imo