Thor Sketch

[SplendidArt]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v372/swordsman242/img025.jpg
please coment, ignore the doodles on the sides.

[Thórisson]

Actually, it was Odin who had only one eye (he gave it up in exchange for wisdom) and two Ravens, Huginn and Muninn (which names roughly translate from Icelandic to Mindful and Rememberous).

Otherwise, his right arm is fine (*his* right arm), his left one needs more work. His hand is not correctly aligned with the spear and his bicep has a weird dent in it.

Hope this helps.
-Th

[dymrus]

I'd suggest for you to sketch with 2 kinds of pencil. A lighter pencil to do your rough layout... pencil like a 2H or lighter. And then once you're happy with the layout and you got all the forms working, go in with the darker pencil and find the proper lines.

It's a good way to teach yourself to be cleaner, and this way also, you can be very messy and free in your rough/initial sketch.

On another note, you can crop the image if you don't want to show the doodles on the sides.

Goodluck and keep at it.

[SplendidArt]

oops this is odin i dunno why i wrote thor sorry,

[goatlight]

oOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoo

[Olof]

Learn to crop and resize your pictures before submitting them. Even in 1600x1200 it's too big.

[Grooveholmes]

Did your momma give you that name?

Very splendid goings on.

[evildisco]

I find the posting of 10 minute doodles on torn paper, offensive, you shall hear from my lawyers.
Good day to you sir.

[JaiL]

hmm.. take note of the clothings.. too tight.. too "close" to the body..