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R.P.W.T
April 25th, 2003, 02:35 AM
It is a story about adventures, but I'm not so satisfied about the perspective.Would you please give some advices to make it better.:p http://www.chinavfx.com/bbs/attachments/200304/25152917-ttttttt.jpg

they are some of a group. I know the characters are not so perfect now, but I will make them better and better. Any advices are welcome. Thanks

shaowei
April 25th, 2003, 03:47 AM
i like the panda in the fat guys clothes.

Bee
April 25th, 2003, 06:55 AM
Awesomely cute!!!! Love the color and the especially details!!!!


Maybe if the perspective was lower and exagerated? And the characters a little larger cos of the perspective... only the lighting really suggests that they are the focal point, my eye is very distracted to the middle where the windows are(which are gorgeous btw), which may be cos it's hard to look at properly on my monitor, but your style seems to suggest a heroic poster look where you want the characters to have centre stage (cos they are posed), so maybe the detail in the buildings should take less of a foreground? - a reward for those who look into the work more.
I prolly don't know much about it but that'd be my two cents :p
is it for a book? it's going to be gorgeous!! (it is already :) ) :bow:

mime
April 25th, 2003, 12:38 PM
wow, i like this a lot
refreshing colors and mood, really great work :)

blackhand
April 25th, 2003, 03:26 PM
I think the perspective is fine for the piece, though I'm not sure what your original idea was.

If you're seeking to have the characters stick out more, I'd just suggest desaturating the background a bit to make the characters look more vibrant.

The shot in itself is framed well and just establishes the characters in a new and strange city.

There's just so many good things going on in this piece, I can hardly take it all in. I really like all the garish and neon colors you use in your palette.

R.P.W.T
April 26th, 2003, 04:10 AM
It's not for some book but just a practice.Thank u for the suggestion!http://www.chinavfx.com/bbs/attachments/200304/25093005-tt.jpg

Yaseck
April 26th, 2003, 09:02 AM
hahaha..

so cuuuute:)