character designs

[ghettomasterchen]

http://www.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/23225_bYQ6wp1MGYwcnUwMTz4MZcePH.jpg

I've been playing around with painter, tried to mimic the coloring style commonly used in comics and games. comments welcome.

[Emptypants]

Excellent character design!!!

I think the most obvious critique I can make is about the inner thigh area. If you took how the armor is sitting on her legs and stood her up straight, you will see that the armor and her legs won't line up right. I think that's why I'm not feeling it right there. Her thigh's are a little chunky for her physique, don't you think? A spider-woman with a J-Lo butt ...

Your coloring skill is pretty good, but your highlights and shadows aren't all following each other.

[ghettomasterchen]

a new design I just finished.

http://www.9rider.com/game_img/chara_img/robo_00.jpg

[tyboogie]

i like your designs ghetto--i think you can take your design sensibilities even furhter in the future--hopefully well see them evolve
on this forum

i think its seen as rude when you dontt acknowledge someones crit--( empty pants)


your thighs are pretty hefty

the bottom robot would have trounble moving=

i like the samurai guy

[ghettomasterchen]

oh my bad, certainly didn't mean to ignore emptypant's crit. I just wanted to wait for a few more crits b4 responding to them all. and thank you...definitely very good observations and crit from you guys.

sometimes I don't notice the off proportions until after the drawing is finished. since I'm relatively new in using digital coloring techniques I haven't tried many different coloring styles to my drawings, do u guys like this kind of detail finish or would u prefer to see something looser like say what the artist from metal gear solid does.

here's another design I did a week ago, and again comments welcome.

http://www.9rider.com/game_img/chara_img/bee_00.jpg