attempt at painting

[stikler999]

comments and crits please. i really need help on my painting.... anything to help me out with colors, technique, etc. i'm about 40 minutes into this and i don't want to ruin it. i'm happy so far with it, but i want it to look more "finished" anythiing you got. thanks!!

http://members.fortunecity.com/geoffd9000/still-life.jpg

[stikler999]

well instead of posting a new thread asking for the same stuff... i'll just add this here. comments and most importantly... crits!!! :D needs something.... it's just not done... and i'm not quite sure what to do now. please critique... i'm gonna go check out some paintings to help me along.

http://members.fortunecity.com/geoffd9000/portrait.jpg

[theognis]

cant see since its hosted at fortune city

[Peter Johansson]

you need a wider range of colors. from what I
gather youve used white, red and brown
(im reffering to the second pic)
as you said, study other ppls paintings and
read some coloring books.
also look after how to use reflective light.
very neat effect if you can master it

keep it going