take a look at my drawing

[stan]

long time no post... been quite busy lately...
http://www.instituteofmedia.com/stanley/sketchdump/36.jpg

c/c appreciated

[keyth]

i like the qualities in the face. the coloring looks pretty good too. the only crit i would have is the overall design...it lacks something. for example, he's holding a little weenie knife. now, i'm not saying that there always HAS to be some huge weapon or anything. but this just reads a bit odd to me. also, does the cloth in his hand serve some purpose? or is he just holding it? i just think if you beef up some of the design, the image could be a lot stronger.

i love crits so, it's just my 2 cents:p . definitely a nice peice.

[blackhand]

That bandage looks like a pretty intimidating weapon. Just kidding.

The costume design is pretty well thought out and consistent. You might want to consider unifying the colors a bit--it's not so much they clash, but they don't seem to 'click' together.

Just a minor observation, but the right shoe looks pointier than the left shoe. It's a shame if you don't have the time to finish this up.

[Emptypants]

:iws: Yeah, I agree, the colors on the outfit need to be unified more. You have 7 colors total making up his outfit. What's that red doing there around his lap area, did the ketchup spill out of his burger during lunch? The color of the baggy parts of the pants should match up with his shirt, or vice versa ... that will unify it more.

I think what Keyth is trying to say is that your character's stance is so strong, he looks like a punk thug trying to take your wallet, and not a martial arts kung fu kick yo ass with my ribbon type of guy.

You have a really nice style and it looks very controlled. Awesome stuff. :chug: