Fightin' zombies

[Auralius]

Lots of work to go on this one. Actually, you might say it's a "work in progress." Any crits would be appreciated. Thanks.

http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d148/Auralius2004/BaptistA.jpg

[Sepulverture]

Your light source seems to be a bit inconsistent. The zombie on the guys right, like right below him for example. Your main lightsource seems to be coming from the top right corner of the picture, but the top front of that zombies head is shaded. I`m not that great with lightsources myself (still learning), so if I am wrong I apologize, but that is really the first thing that caught my attention. Other than that this looks like it`s shaping up to be a kick ass picture,　look forward to seeing it`s progress. Hope that helped!

[Auralius]

I guess it's not clear yet, but the main light source is the guy's outstretched hand. Secondary's that torch in the back. I'm still working on light, too.

[freemantillimcaught]

Pushing the contrast up a tad would make everything stand out far better. But otherwise its got some nice potential

[Sepulverture]

Ah, I hadn`t noticed the holy hand thing going on. I guess the only thing I can say then is to post an update with more defined light sources and as the other fella said, bumped contrast and maybe some more accurate crits can be posted. Keep going! Looks like it could be a doozy!

[Auralius]

Sepulverture, freeman, thanks for the crits. I'm gonna post the finished drawing in the critique center in the next couple of days (hopefully with a lot of contrast!), so please look for it and tell me what you think.

[Auralius]

Ok, I'm posting one more work-in-progress. The background hasn't been worked on much, and it'll end up much darker than it is now, but our hero and the zombies are pretty much finished. Thoughts?

http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d148/Auralius2004/BaptistB.jpg (http://photobucket.com)