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bennykapelli
April 24th, 2003, 06:00 AM
Hello.
I need a suggestion about my sketch. Tonight i changed the drawing from my first idea, but a workmate told me that he preferred the original version (with the man).

which one do you like?


http://bennykapelli.interfree.it/Pictures/Horse.JPG

...and... take a look at this picture (wip)

http://bennykapelli.interfree.it/Pictures/Benny1.JPG

Thank you
Bye

metalwinds
April 24th, 2003, 06:05 AM
i agree with your workmate, the original is stronger. the big monster guy doesnt seem to fit in with the subject matter, and he makes the composition weaker.

Mindflaw
April 24th, 2003, 08:11 PM
I agree with metalwinds, the original is better. I think the crossing diagonals gets a little disrupted by the monsters size, anyhow the original is much better, more feeling in it

behemot5
April 25th, 2003, 01:12 PM
i sincerely prefer the one on the left.........

mushuhaha
April 26th, 2003, 02:11 AM
The guy.