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Rhoshone
January 24th, 2006, 05:25 PM
Camera: Sony707...and 717's...discontinued.. >.<

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b261/Lust-Oliver/Other/DSC00763.jpg
Bus Tunnel
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b261/Lust-Oliver/Other/DSC00754.jpg
My City :P sry bout the size..
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b261/Lust-Oliver/Other/BuildingAngle.jpg
Building Perspective

More next week...i hope...

Critiques? -___- anything im doing wrong?...:yawn:
Will-Saunders
January 24th, 2006, 06:01 PM
I love the tunnel, great lighting and mood.
The building perpective one is good, but I think it would look better straight (not taken at an angle). It would help show the perpective better because you would see the lines going away from you more definatly.
GeikoSera
January 24th, 2006, 10:12 PM
Ahhhh! Providence!!! <3 I went to school there at RISD.

I miss it!

Your shots are lovely! I'd love to see more! :)
Rhoshone
January 25th, 2006, 01:57 PM
ahhh, u noticed the secenery!!! :o i went to RISD for bout 1/2yr didnt quite meet up to my standards of a art school....kind of forceful but never the less a good school i got to URI now.. -.-

anyways more pics!!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY ME! :D

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b261/Lust-Oliver/Other/escalator.jpg
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b261/Lust-Oliver/Other/DSC00737.jpg
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b261/Lust-Oliver/Other/Sunset1.jpg

Here ya go Will i gave it another shot :o not the kinda lighting i wanted but meh...-.-
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b261/Lust-Oliver/Other/DSC00814.jpg
maybe i shoulda shot it with the camera more facing up to the building to show the perspective more? :/
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b261/Lust-Oliver/Other/DSC00811.jpg
CopyWrite
January 27th, 2006, 09:26 AM
The staircase one hurts my eyes.

I'm afraid of hieghts too :)
Rhoshone
January 30th, 2006, 06:14 PM
#1
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b261/Lust-Oliver/Other/DSC02118.jpg
#2
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b261/Lust-Oliver/Other/DSC02110.jpg
#3
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b261/Lust-Oliver/Other/DSC02095.jpg
#4
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b261/Lust-Oliver/Other/DSC02076.jpg
#5 - Another Shot Of The Tunnel Juss Different Angle and Side -_- "i love this tunnel"
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b261/Lust-Oliver/Other/DSC02069.jpg
#6
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b261/Lust-Oliver/Other/DSC02062.jpg
#7
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b261/Lust-Oliver/Other/DSC02043.jpg
#8 ^.^
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b261/Lust-Oliver/Other/DSC02039.jpg

Maybe More Next Week :)

"Comments?, Critiques?"
claudeEGYPT
January 30th, 2006, 06:45 PM
The cannister one appeals to me the most.. i like that long depth of field with that unique perspective..
Baron
February 1st, 2006, 05:34 AM
Wow! Your stuff looks great!

I will say also that the building one looks better not on an angle, or a slight angle where it faids at the top...perspective thingy.

Anyhoo, you've inspired me to go outside and take pictures!
Rhoshone
February 2nd, 2006, 04:28 PM
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b261/Lust-Oliver/Other/DSC02052.jpg
Heh:o
Rhoshone
February 2nd, 2006, 04:29 PM
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b261/Lust-Oliver/Other/deadrose.jpg
messing around with a composition
Jaunty
February 5th, 2006, 06:09 PM
Heh, the first thing I thought when I saw unfaithful was "screwed." It's a really nice piece, not sure about the text, though. Maybe it's just the dropshadow.
Rhoshone
February 5th, 2006, 08:15 PM
ill take note of that next time :D