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dassem
January 24th, 2006, 03:54 AM
Hi, Im a new guy here on CA,
decided to post some of my pictures,
critics most welcome :)

1.
http://info.wsisiz.edu.pl/~kazmierk/pictures/bottles.jpg

2.
http://info.wsisiz.edu.pl/~kazmierk/pictures/candle.jpg

3.
http://info.wsisiz.edu.pl/~kazmierk/pictures/candle2.jpg

4.
http://info.wsisiz.edu.pl/~kazmierk/pictures/coffeeheven.jpg

5.
http://info.wsisiz.edu.pl/~kazmierk/pictures/coin.jpg

6.
http://info.wsisiz.edu.pl/~kazmierk/pictures/foliage.jpg

7.
http://info.wsisiz.edu.pl/~kazmierk/pictures/raindrop.JPG

8.
http://info.wsisiz.edu.pl/~kazmierk/pictures/snowman.jpg

ShadeOfDawn
January 24th, 2006, 09:21 AM
That waterdrop (is it a raindrop?) is REALLY nice! In general you have good composition and very good ideas. You seem to like macro shots, which i think are great! show us some more stuff please

dassem
January 24th, 2006, 10:06 AM
Thanks,
yes it's raindrop, photo taken while there was heavy rain at the pool :)

majesticrulez
January 24th, 2006, 01:19 PM
Like your work, but Shoot more or post more of your work if its different

Barret_wallace
January 24th, 2006, 03:44 PM
hmm
don't get offended by anything i say, EVER! :)

1. the picture is confusing, the cigarette is my first focus point and then the bottles lift my eyes right up and i just focus on the cointreau label ;)
this was most likely not attended. try to control the focus point in your pictures.

5. this picture has lots of potential, but the object in the upper left in you picture is pulling my eyes up. :x

7. i hate grains ;) try reducing your ISO, never use a ISO above 400
this picture is nice but try cropping out the lower part, nothing interesting there

and again welcome ;)