new ::sigh:: crap

[sin]

http://www.digitalpose.com/mbr/504/16846/p/291056_7178109134458196963_vl.jpg

ok firstly, its a WIP so yeah. also i apologize for the crude image quality, my host wont allow for anything bigger than 2,000 kb and the best quality i could get anywhere near that was 3k


any suggestions?

[Zafio]

Imho his neck and chest are a bit too long, perhaps is due to style purposes?
About suggestions, imho would be nice to show a little bit of a "hair tail" by his left side or so. At last, I hope you will ink and/or paint it! x)

keep it up :)

[Spounge]

No, not crap at all. I especially like the design for the robes and his right arm. Is the sketch cut off at the knees? If not ,he would look more magnificent in my opinion, if you made him taller. Also the bottom of his pecs look uneven. Maybe try playing with shortening the overall cut of the muscle. My 2 cents:thumbsup: I can't wait to see this bad ass painted:)

[sin]

i have a final version scanned, but i cant paint at all, i have no idea what to do, so ill post the final unpainted pencil rendering in the finally finished section after fixing what you guys said. thanks for all the feedback, i really appreciate it!