Dwarf warrior

[sethodie]

Hi Everybody!

I have borrowed an old Wacom Tablet from my friend to try how it works and if I can use to draw in this way...

This is my first wacom colored picture. Please write what do You think about it.

Best regards
Marcin

http://www.yoop.pl/my/dwarf2_painted_16.jpg http://www.yoop.pl/my/dwarf2.jpg

[Irate Customer]

Good stuff! There are only two things I noticed which I would change. The hand holding the axe looks unfinished, and the beard could use just a tad bit more detail. Something to make it look more like hair versus cotton? I don't know how else to describe it.

The axe head looks great!

Irate

[ArtJunky]

The line drawing is really strong...nice detail. I noticec the hand also. A little more work would do it.

The beard, I didn't have a problem with the beard but the style of the drawing, generally, has harder lines. However, since the design is oriental, having a wispy look to the hair would not be out of character.

[sethodie]

Hi,

Thanks for replies :)
Here is updated dwarf

http://www.yoop.pl/my/dwarf_painted_3.jpg

[Erik]

Nice picture and nice axe!

Crit: the dwarf's right arm(our left) is way too short. I guess it's meant to point towards us and has foreshortening but it is unclear from the picture.

Great picture otherwise.

[Molin]

Yo,
like the axehead.

/Molin

[sethodie]

Thanks Erik,
Right hand really looks too short. I have to redesign it.

Best regards
Marcin