Comic Cover

[Bennihana]

this is a cover concept for a comic that I am getting pulished by a small local indy label....Sorry I couldnt fit the whole thing in there, but floppy disks only hold so much...

http://thumbs.deviantart.com/300W-96A096/large/indyart/scifi/Bennys_First_cover.jpg

[Derlaine]

im not a smoker but ...his hands seem a little awkward to me, as in , he's holding his fire so far away from his cig...maybe it should be nearer ? it looks like he's holding the lighter and looking down at his legs right now.

[Bennihana]

the reason he is looking down is because the dot on his shirt is red, only I scanned the drawing black n white...
But I do see an awkwardness in the hands/

[Junra Thogue]

One thing that I would suggest is for you to have a rounder circle frame. You could even crop it with a straight circle. I also get a little confused finding the mouth because there's another dot right underneath the nose. Asides from these little nitpicks, the piece is one of your more solid ones. Keep it up with the inks! See you around, Ben!;)