Derlaine
April 20th, 2003, 06:13 PM
hello~~ this is a piece i am doing as a print to sell at Anime Expo, ( hopefully earn me some $$$ to pay for plane ticket )
the background doesn't feel powerful enough to me, it's like she's fading into it...especially the bottom part. i think it is because it's too white and her wings etc are already white ?
i was thinking of adding yellow to the fog at the bottom but i think that would be just weird without sunlight in the background
help ;_; color and background is one of my weak points >< any other crits would be welcomed ~ much thanks in advance !
http://www.tastygraphite.net/Illustrations/belldandy.jpg
the background doesn't feel powerful enough to me, it's like she's fading into it...especially the bottom part. i think it is because it's too white and her wings etc are already white ?
i was thinking of adding yellow to the fog at the bottom but i think that would be just weird without sunlight in the background
help ;_; color and background is one of my weak points >< any other crits would be welcomed ~ much thanks in advance !
http://www.tastygraphite.net/Illustrations/belldandy.jpg