Angel girl - posts of critic are welcomed

[mroq]

I was inspired by another member of conceptart forum but I have forgotten where his thread was, so I could not add my picture to it.

Can anybody give some critics to these?

http://www.mmogspot.com/~mroq/aniol.jpg

http://www.mmogspot.com/~mroq/aniol2.jpg

[mroq]

anybody?

[geckonia]

I really like the idea of holding her wings over her head like that... and the way they're attached. Was was your thinking behind that?

[metalwinds]

looks like you could use some more responses.. . .cool pose. i agree with geckonia, the wing idea is good. the anatomy and proportions are off on the figure though, and i think you should be wery of your line quality... .in places it looks really scratchy and sloppy. also, in the pic, her knees are not touching the ground, but if you were to try that pose in real life, most (if not all) of the bodies weight rests on the knees and feet. the grid on the paper kinda distracts my eye too. not bad.. keep drawing.

[mroq]

about wings - I had both hussars and punk subculture on my mind :)

thanks for all the critics, especially for anatomy ones