First work

[Ghostey]

Heya there,and welcome in my thread. This is my first work that I post here on Conceptart. I'd like to inform though,that I personally did not make everything,but I nicked the outlines from a photo. Next work will be completly mine.:dead:

Since somehow I cant post Attachments, it can be viewed here :
http://www.aha4adsl.nl/dbz/Graphics/pic2.png

[Recursive_End]

Welcome!
the general shape seems good.
But it definitively needs more forms. add some shading were there should be, give more depth.
Also try to get a bigger pic :)

[Ghostey]

Thanks alot !
Like you said,I've shaded her more,hoping to improve it :)
http://www.aha4adsl.nl/dbz/Graphics/pic3.png

And well.. its hard for me now to make the picture bigger,but yes,other people have mentioned that to me aswell. I will keep it in mind at the next piece !

[Fl3wk]

When posting, paste the URL like you have, but then add a where it starts and a where it ends. If this does not work, save in JPEG.

'Her' left arm looks detatched.

Test

http://www.aha4adsl.nl/dbz/Graphics/pic3.png

EDIT2: as you can see, using that formula works.

[Ghostey]

Hehe thanks,thats usefull :) I'll get started on her arm right away,looks like she broke it :o

Edit : Updated version : http://www.aha4adsl.nl/dbz/Graphics/pic4.png

[MikeMakesModels]

Post a bigger pic next update - around the ole 640*480 is usually about right, just make sure we can see most of it and appreciate your shading skills to the full.

Looking alright so far though.

[Ghostey]

Duper ! The picture itself is made in this size. Personally,I prefer small drawings.
Another example is this smoking skeleton :
http://www.aha4adsl.nl/dbz/Graphics/avvy10.png

[Dusk22a]

I saw this and I immediately loved it. I think the design here is incredibly strong, definitely redo this just in a bigger size and give it finished detail, don't go crazy with a background but maybe some kind of drapery to really bring out the soft curves and lines, I can almost see her sitting in some kind of Persian tent with draped cloth and hints of patterns everywhere, I really love this sketch, the pose looks natural and not at all forced. Please redo it larger, I'd love to see this as a finished piece.

[orionlesc]

stupid thing...little?why?have you tried to print it?
why?
whY????
I can´t sleep..
small pictures...you are absolutelly crazy...really

[Ghostey]

Know I am crazy,think in another way as you mean though. I pick small pictures,because I am rather bad at the linework,but good at filling with small details(or atleast,thats my opinion)

[orionlesc]

I don´t understand any thing...I am spanish...but you say strange things...

[Ghostey]

Alright then,this one is a tad bigger. I just couldnt pull off the eyes and hair,but I did spend alot of time in the skin tones,so I thought I´d show you guys anyway. Sticked alot to my reference pic on this one,meet-drumrooling- my cousin. http://www.aha4adsl.nl/dbz/Graphics/kay.png