Ogre eating a Prostitute

[navel_lint]

http://blackeden.org/prostitution2_web.jpg

a little idea i had one night when i was kinda anti-girl.
not "gay" anti-girl. just anti-girl.
:)

[Chaser226]

Funny little ogre you got there. The thing that bothers me the most is that it doesn't look like hes really biting down and pulling, looks likes shes drop kicking him in the mouth. :p

[navel_lint]

hmmm. good call. i think you're right. it could've used more
movement.

[poly_cube]

I think I would work on the stomach area- seems really square. also seems like you want us to beleive he's fat by squishing down the bellybutton- but when we look at his side its like a box shape- maybe add a few love handels on him to give the impresion he is a little chunky. I like the hairy arms though

[MindCandyMan]

I think the illusion would be better if both figures where in perspective. Currently the ogre is straight on as well as the woman he is eating. Both of his arms are in the same place lined up...same with hers etc... Turn him 3/4 and give him some volume and you will see the illustration come alive.