Need some feed back please. (Big DL)

[syco26]

I would love some feedback on these wallpapers.They are for a comp at House of the Dead (http://www.jayfotos.com/forum/showthread.php?threadid=304) .

These pics where not painted by me, they where painted by Jay Fotos (http://www.jayfotos.com)

I just arranged them and added the text(supplied by Jay)for the wallpapers.
There are six intotal but we can only enter once.I would just like your opinion on which is the best-the one I should post.
Thanks in advance.
http://209.132.69.82/uploaded_from_zbc/200304/user_image-1050772410kql.jpg
http://209.132.69.82/uploaded_from_zbc/200304/user_image-1050772511kug.jpg
http://209.132.69.82/uploaded_from_zbc/200304/user_image-1050772592ckn.jpg
http://209.132.69.82/uploaded_from_zbc/200304/user_image-1050772659vce.jpg
http://209.132.69.82/uploaded_from_zbc/200304/user_image-1050772808jpk.jpg
http://209.132.69.82/uploaded_from_zbc/200304/user_image-1050772987elk.jpg
Sorry about the big download.

[WildSpruceMoose]

I'm partial to the first, second, and fourth. The others are good too, however these 3 are truly my favourites.

The repitition in the 3rd gives impact, however for a competition, the mirror image thing may not be as highly regarded.(still very good work) The 5th is cool, but other ones on the page speak to me more.

The last is very cool probably another I'd seriously consider to use, actually. I like the feel of these and style very much. The composition is very well done as well.:evilbat:

[endregan]

yeah well i dunno - since u didnt make the pictures and you added the typo and "arranged the images" i would say you did an okay job. the typo is large and takes the focus away from the images - bad thing. you need to work on typo and composition a bit more :). (just some advice, i am into the design theorys and practices myself)

[syco26]

Thank you WildSpruceMoose & endregan for your thoughts.

I have taken what every one has said(on 4 sites) and made the text smaller.The one that is missing has been dropped.Can you give me your opinion again PLEASE.

http://209.132.69.82/uploaded_from_zbc/200304/user_image-1050858837tls.jpghttp://209.132.69.82/uploaded_from_zbc/200304/user_image-1050858876rft.jpg
http://209.132.69.82/uploaded_from_zbc/200304/user_image-1050858917ymv.jpghttp://209.132.69.82/uploaded_from_zbc/200304/user_image-1050858966sxw.jpg
http://209.132.69.82/uploaded_from_zbc/200304/user_image-1050859012gim.jpg

And sorry for the huge download again.

[WildSpruceMoose]

Now the first and second really hit me hard.(In a good way) I would suggest slightly enlarging the font on the first one even a bit more or making it show through better, because right now it is hard to see.

If the first had the text show through better I would personally go with that, however they all are quite outstanding. The main reason I pick the first, is due to the muscle definition and having the 2 monsters there in different poses is very good for composition. IMO it simply is a stronger graphic.

Just my thoughts,opinions, and preferences ;)

[endregan]

better man i like. the first image u can barely read the font which can be a good thing sometimes- makes them look and notice it then read and take the time. pretty cool stuff!