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[davi]

Http://www.creatureone.com/p/pierce.jpg

[I.was.ink]

His left eye seems too barried deep into his face. His cheekbone looks a bit off to me.ummm.... his nose appears to have no planes whatsoever, and the nostrils are way off. One last little thing I also noticed, was that the ear doesn't go back into perspective with the rest of the head. Also, the back of this guy's head seems a tad short.

Sorry if I was to harsh on your pic. I just saw it and felt like I needed to point these things out to you. One thing I do like is the way you handled those skin tones. I love your bold choice of colors. I'm afraid of color sometimes...:(

Can we see the ref?

[davi]

thanks i see what you mean, i don't honestly have teh ref anymore... i got it somewhere from bmezine.com

[pibb991]

i dig the fleshtones too. only thing i would add is maybe be a little more delicate with the ear and add some more subtle tones

[MindCandyMan]

Your eye is becoming more and more trained davi...it's really cool to notice the progress...starting to look like real light man...it's awesome. The main structural thing I noticed was that the nose was placed too low which threw off the bottom portion of the head. Careful on the ear...I think it's in perspective cause ears stick out a bit but it isn't rendered fully. I hate doing ears too hehe. I particularly like who you utlized color to show the underside of the cheek bone and the other side of the face. You are thinking like a painter. You went too dark with the eye sockets as well...the shading would probably be more subtle. Great job man you are improving quickly...awesome stuff man.