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anji999
April 18th, 2003, 11:42 PM
Hello everyone. This is my first post. I hope this works. Here's a sketch I did. I wanted a certain noble, heroic quality about him I'd like to go back and do some different angles and tweak certain areas. Comments anyone?

http://image1ex.villagephotos.com/2238830.jpg

thomasaurus
April 18th, 2003, 11:50 PM
nice! Amazing amount of detail except it detracts from everything else. Tone is down a bit and thicken defining lines.

Otherwise I really like it!

Ben
April 19th, 2003, 03:41 AM
Its reminds me of a Neon Genesis siut and a Bubble Gum Crises suit.

Keep up the good work.

Chaser226
April 19th, 2003, 03:47 AM
Yea, I agree with Jnorish. Its too busy, I don't know whats what. Clean it up abit and i'm sure it'll look great.

davi
April 19th, 2003, 05:12 AM
i honestly like it "dirty" :/
personal opinion i guess.

very well done.

finish that suckers leg.

anji999
April 19th, 2003, 03:28 PM
Thanks guys. I did go a little crazy with the line work. I didn't mention it before, but this was my first robot design. My style is typically pretty sketchy like this, but I've been meaning to go back an refine it some more.

behemot5
April 20th, 2003, 11:57 AM
i like shapes of this armor ... perhaps a little bit confuse for some people but i like this way of drawing in my opinion

Tedsuo
April 20th, 2003, 04:22 PM
The only part it gets confusing for me is his chest. That would be the one place I would suggest simplifying. You can tell what's going on everywhere else through the silouette.

Welcome to the board!

sumtinsumtin
April 21st, 2003, 08:56 AM
this is super sweet,
the only criticizm is that it needs to be bigger so i can enjoy it longer
keep it up

metaphysiks
April 22nd, 2003, 06:43 AM
its always a good idea to have a readable silhouette. dont get me wrong, i like the sketch but you have got a lot going on and my eyes get lost on the right side of the image where his arm is, i know there is supposed to be a gap but i cannot always make it out because of all the detail from his arm and the side of his body.
keep up the good work and welcome to conceptart.org
chris

emrcx
July 23rd, 2008, 05:41 AM
cool:oneye: