any comment please?

[behemot5]

may i have some comments on this pic please?http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/freehand/bauhaus_peter_murphy.jpg

[reeves]

Reminds me of a certain Alex Murphy [Robocop]!:nod:

Good Job! I love the eyes.

[el coro]

looks pretty good. i think the nostril area gets a bit confusing, and the lack of any kind of head is a concern, but like reeves said, the eyes look good, but the mouth seems a bit small now that i look at it a bit more. is this a class assignment?good work.-c36

[behemot5]

it's a portrait of peter murphy of bauhaus... i did this one night i was boring....i also tried to have a more interesting portrait drawing quite quickly

[davi]

doing a portrait and not completing all the features of the body causes problems. the missing ear for example, also at the top of the page you loose the form of the skull, very odd. Neck could be shown too.

[behemot5]

thanks a lot..... i had never learn this before...i will try to do a better work next time

[davi]

if possible try drawing the neck/bust aswell.

[Goo]

as el coro said...the nostril area needs more definition. so does the cleft above the lips. go check out android's SPODs, maybe you'll learn a thing or 2:)