First post - few sketches

[mroq]

http://mmogspot.com/~mroq/smok2.jpg

http://mmogspot.com/~mroq/szubienica.jpg

so, what do you think?

[jrr]

i think this are pretty big and belong in the sketches section. i can't really see what they are. you should shrink these before posting them, it'll save you some bandwith and maybe some frustration. :confused:

[mroq]

ok, I made those pictures smaller. now what do you think?

[forevertrue]

I would advice you to try some interesting perspectives to build up some tension...don´t place your objects in the center for they will always appear to be very static if you do this...perhaps try to show some slices instead of the whole object. Increase contrast by drawing the shadow areas very dark and leave highlight areas blank. This will help to make your drawings more vivid and convincing...
:nana

[mroq]

about perspectives - no, those perspectives compare to the clima of the pictures

about shadowing - right :) that's a good advice, thank you
:D

[jrr]

that second image looks creepy, why don't you ink it and color it, see how it goes

[mroq]

i think that when I'll ink the second pic it will be worse because I have never done it before :)