Character: Goral

[Max4d]

Hey dudes

I finished a new character and it's supposed to be an icetroll. I got some serious shading comment on my character called Simmy SparkleCarft, so I tried some new things out. But in my opinion it sucks even more, so I would love it if you guys could give me some handy comments on how to shade better. I would love it even more if you guys could paint over my character and show me how it SHOULD be shaded :D:D.
I also added a poll for the people that are too busy, ignorant or too lazy to post anything of value here. This poll can give me general idea of my drawing skills and of this picture

So I hope that I will get some very useful comment.

Greetz Max4d

Ps, picture made with a digital camera, so the quality is a bit bad.


http://www.strike9.com/file.aspx?path=/Max4d/fullsize/Goral.jpg

[Happeh]

As someone who cannot draw stick figures, the first thing that strikes me is it is too dark. Your fingers must be sore from the shading. You could bring out more of the features if the drawing were lightened in various places.

[Max4d]

Hey

About the darkness, well the digital camera is to blame for that, it made the picture too dark, but i must admit i make them too dark myself. Thx for the comment and keep 'm coming D:D

Greetz Max4d