new pic added

[zealous]

this is my first ever Photoshop drawing/sketch and im kinda proud of it.
its an airship battle above a seaside cliff, and has an exploding airship :tihi:

http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/8751/airshipbattle4sb.jpg

[angel of light]

I'd say clean up the line work a little more because its a little hard to tell whats going on at this stage. A greyscale image would be good to work out the contrast, and it would add depth so we can see whats going on.

[Scubasteve]

Not bad. I don't know what forum Im in. LOL!

[zealous]

i have colored the sky, its a bit crappy because its my first :P

http://img474.imageshack.us/img474/6776/colorabcopy4ot.jpg

[Chronic]

ok...actually this is more confusing now than before u colored it.

I think, just like angel_of_light that u should clean up the lines and greyscale it...and the lines does almost have the same weight everywhere....hard to make out what is back/foreground and moving objects.

[dogfood]

I hate to say it, but without the title, I would have no idea what this is or what's going on. If the main thrust is going to be held together with lines, you need to clean up the lines; if value, you need to define your shapes.

[zealous]

i tried drawing another pic and making the line widths similar
http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/1585/reddragon2nc.jpg

the hand is still a WIP

[zealous]

i updated it, he has a bit of hair and two rings in his chin

http://img345.imageshack.us/img345/8162/redwhair8xo.jpg