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ladycrowe
April 17th, 2003, 09:00 PM
well, my first post on this forum ;) hi, how ya doin?

anyway, just posting this on a few forums to get some good honest critique... hope you like

thus far the modelling is done and the basic texturing is almost done... haven't yet started bump mapping etc...

http://freakspace.net/3d/faerie/colour/3-4left.jpg
http://freakspace.net/3d/faerie/colour/3-4right.jpg
http://freakspace.net/3d/faerie/colour/eye-horn.jpg
http://freakspace.net/3d/faerie/colour/front.jpg

davi
April 18th, 2003, 12:16 AM
those lips are amazing!

great model, you should put some more detail in the eye area, i could picture some wrinkles on the eye lid and stuff.

HeadShot
May 14th, 2003, 01:19 AM
One thing that strikes me is the shape of the eye area. It's too perfect and elliptical. Try looking at your own eyelid in the mirror for reference.

Otherwise its looking great.

WerxOne
May 15th, 2003, 12:51 PM
i agree the eyes dont look correct, but every thing else look great.

michael see
May 18th, 2003, 12:44 PM
hmm..they were right about the eyes..perhaps some highlight in the eyes?sould love to see some expressions from the character..:)
keep it going

Atomicfate
June 5th, 2003, 07:15 PM
i dont know.. i think the eyes fit the rest of the characters feel. the whole thing has a boulbous round feel to it. the shape of the eyes feel like they belong when i look at it.