knocking on heaven's door

[facezero]

hi~^^
this is my recently work.
mmm...
thanks your works~
have a nice day~:)

http://facezero.com.ne.kr/futurewaman222.jpg

http://facezero.com.ne.kr/futurewaman.jpg my home (http://facezero.com.ne.kr)

[Montross]

wow, really terrific. The metal came out awsome. What types of mediums did you use? Way coolzer:)

[blackhand]

The rendering and lighting are done well, and I like that purple sort of patina on the metal surfaces. I think I like the original elven concept better, though.

One area that bothers me about the painting is where the right deltoid meets the pectoral muscle--that area doesn't look like it has any depth or thickness. It just looks like a paper thin sheet spanning across, but that's just nitpicking.

I'm also not that crazy about the type elements in the piece--they stand out too much with the black behind them.

[foster]

this looks quite lovely! the color and rendering of the costume is spot on for me. i do think you need to rethink the type "knocking on" and "door".

wow! you have been getting better and better, and you were already good!

jon

[facezero]

montross// thank you~^^ my mediuim is photoshop7's brush. remaking somthing .. like texture. i was study another thing. next i'll using painter :)

blackhand// thankx~ i accept your crit.and i agree.
i'll try to better good:) piz your crit my next pic.

foster// thank you~ foster! your my favorite artist:hello!:
i wanna meet you. some years later. and get signed your work!(it's my dream;) )
i agee about type.. hh



thank u~

[alex-g]

I have not enough vocabulary to express what I feel but i'm I'm impressed by your work. ;)

[bOne]

the painting is perfect, but why putting Times new roman font like this ?

You could work on the font like Dave mcKean...

[ChadTHX1138]

Awesome piece!

I agree with bone on the font. To me it is a bit distracting.

Not to be making fun but if you look at her body and cover your hand over her head it looks like a surprised robot! heheh
:D

[endregan]

Nice, as they ahve said but particularly noticeable is your font..the knocking on...door and everthing with that font. either take it out and just name it that, which would look better. you could use a cleaner more faded font if you must have knocking on and door..anyhow very cool image, the pose and colour blending is well done!

[Steve T. Laws]

Oi, this is loverly, the pencil really gives us a window into the process.

I'll follow your link and observe more

[jayceel]

Looked at your website, you've got some mad skillz....

Great stuff

JayCeeL

[Tanika]

:eek: Nice metal......distracting metal.....shiney metal. *smack*

Ehh sorry, anyways, I love the picture, my only crit is that the font for "door" should be changed. It just looks out of place. I -really- love the feel of this piece. You are one of my fav artists, keep it up. ^^

[Yaseck]

I love this sketch.. it's very beautiful

[davi]

very cool
the distortion on the floor actually is what distracts my eye. good job though :)