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Chaser226
December 21st, 2005, 11:29 PM
Hehe, I haven't posted in a looooooooooonnnnnnnggg time.. I'm back though.

http://www.timtconcepts.com/gallery/knighthood1.jpg

Pixeldragoon
December 21st, 2005, 11:39 PM
Ehrm... No offense, and I'm not calling you bad by any means- But the lack of background and fine detail in this keep it from really being "Finished". I think it would be better suited (and paid attention to) in the CC section... As far as crits,

IMO you are relying on line WAY too much to get the job done. This isn't always bad, but in the case of the knuckles, it really detracts from the piece. I know the piece is meant to be cold, but I think a dash here and there of warm would make it a bit more effective. As well as some sort of light source that looks like light... not just casted shadows. The head anatomy look a bit wonky, and the jaw on the far side is way too low. The legs might be just a tad too long.

Chaser226
December 22nd, 2005, 12:18 AM
Thank you for sharing..I am slowly getting towards ditching the line drawing altogether.

DSillustration
December 22nd, 2005, 01:20 PM
i would check out Josh Middleton...
this piece has a lot of the same qualities.
you might pick up something useful.

Chaser226
December 22nd, 2005, 10:15 PM
Hmm.. Thanks DS! *Bookmarked*

Thats the type of style I'm into.. I really don't see whats wrong with having outlines.. A lot of people keep it. I agree I need to work on painting without it, but I honestly don't see why this one i did is "that" bad. Oh well. Definantely helped me out a lot.. Thanks again.