frist pic,gibe me some sugest

[R.P.W.T]

http://www.chinavfx.com/bbs/attachments/200304/16104452-xue.jpg


snow monster

[R.P.W.T]

2http://www.chinavfx.com/bbs/attachments/200304/17135525-gui.jpg

[shaowei]

wonderful idea .:evilbat:

[R.P.W.T]

-_-~~

[besom]

hoho!:o

[metalwinds]

cool drawings, but i have some comments. im still looking for the riders face in the first pic.. . .i think it kinda gets lost in the detail. also, the monsters horn looks like it should be angled more toward the viewer in order to avoid hitting its body. the perspective is off on the second picture. the angle you have drawn the buildings at makes the foreground look out of place... . it should be tilted more... . somewhat like the buildings. also, the anatomy on the figure is off. her left leg is too far out from her body.. .almost to the point where it looks detached from the figure. she doesnt appear to be holding onto the wall enough... . .unless she has her left hand grasping something on the wall there is no way she can be balancing there. i like the way you use the digital coloring.. .it almost looks like the pictures have been colored with prismacolor markers.

on a side note. ..you shouldnt get ill tempered when somebody doesnt comment on your pieces.. .you are new here. i have only been a part of conceptart for a few weeks, but i can tell you that in order to get comments.. .you need to give comments. if you respond to other peoples work, you will more than likely get people to repond to yours.. . thats just the way it works. also, this forum seems to be pretty slow on the responses, so you have to give it a little time. nice work though.. .looking forward to seeing more from you.

[theognis]

i like the style. very cool. :)

[R.P.W.T]

Thank you for your instance,i want to know more suggest so i come,and it can make more progress...also,i will make the problem of the pictures over.
And i want to get more feedback.


I get the feedback late but i'm not dissatisfact,because they are my friends.. ^_^

[R.P.W.T]

Originally posted by R.P.W.T
Thanks everyone,
Thank you for your instances. I come here for suggest, because I know it is the best way to make me progressing. I will follow your advices, and looking forward more feedback.

By the way, the responses I left before is just for "shaowei", which is my old friend. I hope that will not seem too strong for others.

[davi]

very cool, the first piece is hard for me to make out. i can see a few things but as a whole i don't know what it is. the second piece is great but i think you could play with some dramatic lighting, maybe making the girl more of a silhouette.

keep up the good work.