The Little MErmaid

[Grendel]

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/freehand/The_littleMermaid.jpg

[anji999]

I like the poses and characters. The diagonals you've placed are pretty dynamic. I kinda like how you made the tail a bit lumpy. My main critism is that I think the shading could be more consistent since they a bit distracting. And the values could be seperated more(more contrast). They're all pretty close right now.

[davi]

neat stuff, i think you need to be a bit more dramatic with your contrasting, i could see much lighter shades and extermely dark places in this piece, would help alot. right now it's look very flat.

also you randomly get bold with your outlines, which is confusing to the viewer.