i serve cheese (image heavy... and nudity)

[acid]

just some random stuff

http://acid.noobgrinder.com/digital/cheese.jpg

http://acid.noobgrinder.com/drawing/doodle2.jpg
yeah.... the one arm is WAY off

http://acid.noobgrinder.com/drawing/doodle.jpg

http://acid.noobgrinder.com/drawing/monster.jpg
yeah... you know who it is

http://acid.noobgrinder.com/drawing/naked3.jpg
life drawing... yeah... my first life drawing class....
http://acid.noobgrinder.com/drawing/naked2.jpg
more life drawing
http://acid.noobgrinder.com/drawing/naked4.jpg
i don't really like the larger pose on this page... but the smaller one i think is nice
http://acid.noobgrinder.com/drawing/naked.jpg
real quick gestures... to warm up and stuff

[acid]

comments anyone?

[DSillustration]

i think you should look at "line quality" a little more.
your lines are "jumpy" and in-decisive.

a good looking line that is wrong, is better than a crappy looking line that is accurate, imo.
add some confidence in your strokes.
try to create the upper portion of a leg (for instance) in one smooth stroke.
if its not right,
do it again, right over it, in one stroke again.

but dont go back and forth, back and forth, with staggered lines.
why do it in 10 strokes if you can do it in 1 ?