female demon [nudity]

[bOne]

I continue my training to develop heroic fantasy characters.

I'm trying to give i little cartoonish style, I want something fun, and not a completely dark universe.

I wanted to do a more dynamic movement to the pose, like she was dancing...

http://bonestudio.free.fr/images/succube.jpg

bOne

[blackhand]

The juxtaposition of boobies and scary demon parts are doing weird things to my head.

The lighter, cartoonish look is pulled off well. The pose is a bit stiff, though. Part of the reason may be you didn't finish drawing the legs, so essentially the gesture is only half conveyed. But the upper body in general is pretty rigid.

Overall, it's very well drawn, though. I like the little rings on the horns that hold up that hair covering.

[Oblio]

lovely again.
I'll say her evil hand has some issues - some perspective issues at the very top (where she holds the weapon) and also the integration with the body seems too rough - i would have give her an evil breast too.
Stiffness i think comes from the head - the head is in a clasic "statue" pose. Dancing feeling is usualy given by the placement of head, shoulder and hips on a curve - dancing flows - and while the hips and shoulders are fine - the neck is stubborn :).
I hope you get my point.
Apart from that - it's a lovely comeback. Keep em rockin'

Oblio

[Patrick]

Very cool! I particularly like the arms. The stitches are a nice touch too.

[davi]

amazing character in this, it doesn't look completely female because of the jaw, but if you can ignore that it's demonicsextastic!

[amoe]

well done but female??? :)

-amoe-

[Wolvie]

Does it matter if it's a Female? It's a Demon! :D

[ChadTHX1138]

I dont mean to be rude but I saw the face first and thought it was a guy. When i saw the boobs...WHOA!!

I didnt even bother to read the title, Sorry, That was my first impression.

[KayCustomz]

I just thought the same thing there

[bOne]

:) this is exactly the reaction I wanted

I want to develop a universe of heroic fantasy, were the things are not black and white :)

[KayCustomz]

still not getting your plan...:confused:

[bOne]

I just want to surprise people.

All the heroic fantasy worlds are based on the same rules.

Orcs = bad, human = good etc...

Nobody talk about problems of society, racism or sexuality.

I could say about this demon : A shemale demon :)

[Hyborian]

very FENG ZHU,ish

i love it
ecpesialy the stitches on her nipples :D

[grey]

cool piece, your linework rocks, reminds me (in spirit) of satanika

i agree the evil hand's a bit off, looks kinda pudgy, and Oblio's idea of an "evil breast" is brilliant!

twisted

[Clodhopper]

I like it. but theres a few things i think should be done to give her a little more femininity...like the lips, i know is supposed to be distorted, but I think the lips should be fuller, and the bottom lip more prominant than the top... the way you have the lips now looks too masculine- imho. also, maybe give her some fuller hair on top-looks flat. but i like the rings on the horns too...just my input- i don't like the "one evil breast" idea, in my mind; breasts are always symetrical.
but i love yer posts, I always click a thread when i see yer name next to it. and top notch line work!

[ChaosEidolon]

dude...that is beefy...i love it. good weight distribution...it makes the figure very dynamic...and that expression is great.
Im starting to become a big fan of your work

Edit: now that i look at it...theres one thing that irks me. Shouldnt the Xyphoid process be higher? Its usually like right at the bottow of the breats.
Ultimately it doesnt detract from the piece though so its just a nitpick. keep on rockin on :thumbsup: