golem wip

[daarken]

hey guys. here is a drawing i am currently working on, and i need some good c&c. it seems that my fellow poo eaters dont want to comment on it, so i was hoping you guys could help. thanks!
http://daarken.com/decaygolem2.jpg

[Fozzybar]

The finished parts are looking great and will be awesome if it's finished...

But: The top (don't know the word for) of the sword looks weird...it's got a different perspective then the rest of the sword...

[Rickxu]

:eek:

Woo, that will be stunning. I think you did it seriously. I can't wait to see the finished pic.

My opinion: the two guys could not be seen clearly for the same color painted on them, just trying to change a little color on one of them.

Cheers

Rick

[Jabo]

You've been reading to much of "The Tenth" Comics lately, haven't you?

The beast really looks like one of those bad guys.

Nice work so far, although it lacks a little contrast regarding the lower right corner...

[daarken]

actually, ive never read the tenth before.

thanks for the comments guys, i would really like to fix my drawing, but im late on the deadline already i think...poop. ill probably fix it tomorrow just for myself.

[Dan.v.D.]

i love the faces of the two guys

[garg]

I really like this one.. The atmosphere.. the faces.. the destruction.. the sense of panic..
good job :)

[nil]

very nice. its a little hard to tell whats going on the monsters head/shoulder area thought. it might be becaus eits so dark up there...dunno


see...the pooeaters dont take care of you...come...join usss...:p

[daarken]

haha, yeah, the poo eaters dont seem to be as friendly towards "noobies." for some reason they seem to have an extreme hatred toward them. perhaps i shall defect!

[Oblio]

i like the background filled with wood crap but i don't understand that "wall" - maybe more detail (not much in order to keep the composition)?
Also the little fellow down there doesn't read too good - maybe you can shift it in color - red maybe?
Keep it up!

Oblio

[daarken]

yes, that wall is pissing me off. now that the deadline has been extended i can work on it.

[Oblio]

NICE UPDATE!

One more thing - for the dynamics of the piece - there seems to be something coming out of the monster's head - small red stuf.
You could make that a big jet (waved) of blue stuf or smth (it will balance the little blue guy in composition) with dynamics - something between a whale blue water jet but with a fire like feeling to it. Mayme like a blue fire - gas made, or like a soft cloth_
You get the picture - just a thought.

Oblio
Are you doing to detail it more?

[daarken]

haha, actually that is supposed to be his flesh kinda waving in the wind...kinda hard to read i know. i might work on it a little more...

[koinu]

Nice painting, Although I'm having trouble with your creature jumping too far into the foreground. You can fix this by bringing more contrast to the environment. Yuor warriors sword needs some work to make it look more like metal, basic highligts would work. All in all I am not one of those poo eaters!!! Good job....:evilbat: