Serren :: CHOW 3

[Sunny]

I thought I too, along with Oregano, would post my final CHOW entry for the week. I wanna know what u think about it.

http://www.bestofthebeast.com/dsg/babe8.jpg

This is full size. I usually make it a habbit to work at print quality just incase I ever decided to take it to print for whatever reason.


http://www.bestofthebeast.com/dsg/babe9.jpg

[stoph]

haha obligatory nipple slip? face is not exactly femanine, i understand shes a seasoned fighter, but even so, a more femanistic approach to her face would have been nice. youll also note that her right shoulder is up a couple of inches too high. other than that, this is good :)

[Sunny]

thanx stoph, the face was drawn from a woman but i must have misread the discription (not unpleasent to looks at) which problably means pleasent to look at . I hate double negatives lol.

I meant to have her shoulder up higher but ya it does seem awkward when considering the pose of the rest of the arm.

[0kelvin]

The thing that really bugs me about this is the armor. It makes very little sense. It seems to be placed randomly, without any thought into what it's supposed to be protecting. Plus, that big band around her midsection would make it impossible for her to bend over at all. And if I'm not mistaken, she won't be able to lower her raised arm at all.

Now I don't have a problem with exposed breasts, but in this case it seems a little silly and contrived. I mean, nipples are sensitive man! Having it chafe against a steel plate all day isn't going to be fun. Not to mention how cold that would be in the morning.

Overall, good work. You've got the rendering part down pretty good, you just need to put more thought into the design to make it believable.



0kelvin

[Sunny]

Well I will have to agree 100%. Very observant of you and I am quite pleased with your suggestion. I have strived for years to get the rendering part down. But now I need to spend time thinking hard about the composition of every peice. I Suppose sometimes I draw a sketch and like what I see overall but in the end parts just arent logical.

Thank you very much Okelvin