A pic I'm working on-need your thoughts please.

[syco26]

This pic is going to be my entry for the Monster Fight comp at House of the Dead (http://www.jayfotos.com/forum/showthread.php?threadid=225) Forum.I would just like some c&c on it before I complete it.Franky and the two side profiles are complete(I think) and the monster next to Franky is nearly finished.Do you think the pic works at all or is it shocking?Please let me know what you think.
Thanks in advance.

http://www.pixolator.com/ubb/uploaded_files/user_image-1050254262zcg.jpg

[syco26]

Just a little update on Franky.Trying to make him fit the sceene.Any thoughts or sujestions on this pic - PLEASE.http://www.pixolator.com/ubb/uploaded_files/user_image-1050334050jmk.jpg

[Blackwell]

Looks like it's coming along, syco -- it's a little hard to tell exactly what's going on, though - there's no focal point to the image. But the lighting looks cool, and franky and his friends look really good, too.

[Nimrod]

Yes, even before I read blackwell's post I decided the biggest issue with it is lack of a clear composition. Remove or subdue some of the extra elements like the heads, and try to make some compositional elements that lead the eye to a focal point (likely Franky or more specifically his face, since I'm assuming he is the main subject). Other than that, the individual parts of it look good, keep working on it! Just pick a main area of interest and work on it more.