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Punchy
November 8th, 2005, 04:22 PM
well this is my second attempt at a landscape in painter. any crits would be helpful....

from photo ref...
http://idisk.mac.com/vriley/Public/ja2_s.jpg
madster
November 8th, 2005, 05:35 PM
Clean up the blurriness. It almost hurts to look at, it's so out of focus.

~M
Gandhi 2
November 8th, 2005, 05:38 PM
The car on the right is bugging me the main body seems to be at an angle. I agree with madster about the out of focus nature of the image. At least in the foreground.
JOTAPEGE
November 8th, 2005, 08:12 PM
Beautiful. Like your 3D sense and realism of pavement (it does not need to be photographic to be believable). Glowing lights are very similar to those seen in rainy nights. Keep showing!
Waruwari
November 8th, 2005, 08:33 PM
The lighting is looking good but i agree with madster it needs a bit more focus.
Bad Brownie
November 9th, 2005, 01:33 AM
Hey, I like! Consider this response an encouragement to continue. It'd look great with some more detail, but it's kinda a neat style on its own too.
Punchy
November 9th, 2005, 03:57 AM
madster : ah, the fine art of the subtle ca critique. ^_^

Gandhi 2 : thanks! I had the car "moved"=)

JOTAPEGE : thanks! I'm going to try to do a bunch more.

Waruwari : thanks! glad you liked it.

Bad Brownie : thanks! I tried to just get the pic to look correct at like 25% and then work in the detail later if it was going ok. I wittled a bit on it thanks to the feedback.

http://idisk.mac.com/vriley/Public/ja3_s.jpg