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wallychairmover
April 12th, 2003, 08:05 AM
just tryin to get my environments stuff goin now
http://www.fiddlegarden.com/hut.JPG
http://www.fiddlegarden.com/lodge.JPG

Rictus Grin
April 13th, 2003, 09:08 AM
Very very nice.

I really dig these! I could see these fitting in well with the Warcraft universe. Excellent pencil style. Obviously you're confident with your pencil strokes.

Love to see these colored.

Adam
April 13th, 2003, 10:33 AM
i agree! However, I'd like to see some more attention paid to line weight/perspective - right now, the second finished sketch (while badass) has some ambiguous depth - it needs a little something to help distinguish the back from the front (i think) - i'm not sure what exactly it needs though :( sucks to leave crits and no suggs, but that's all i got :) except for the depth in the second one, really great work!

wallychairmover
April 13th, 2003, 04:37 PM
hmm i think i see what you mean about the 2nd one's depth, after some scrutiny i think the large statue it's resting on may be a bit off as far as perspective goes, i think because i did such an even shading over the whole thing that perhaps the scale is a little less dramatic too. hey i'm givin myself crits, you are powerful adam, perhaps if i ever get a free moment i'll throw some color on these but i've foudn that they pencil work get's a little lost when i do that, and i'm a show off so it's hard to sacrifice that

blackhand
April 13th, 2003, 06:36 PM
This is just nitpicking on the presentation, but presentation does matter. The lettering is somewhat distracting. It may not sound like much, but go back and do the lettering tighter or do it by computer.

I like the drawings themselves, but stuff like having bad lettering and sloppy borders and having images tangential to the borders can detract from the piece.

I really like that sort of Tiki god motif/theme you have in these images.