Launched new x-perimental comic strip

[squidburn]

I'm looking for feedback on a new comic strip we just launched at http://admansf.com. "Diary of an Ad Man" ... My friend scripts it -- I do the graphics. It's journalistic in nature, and relies heavily on Photoshop layering. We're serious about finding a market for the strip ... more than likely pitch it to a local alternative weekly.

Any thoughts are appreciated. My main concern is if the strip works for what we intend to do with it.

http://citizensquid.com/adman/comic/051023_adman.gif

Thanks!

[AngryScientist]

:right: Sticky: RULE: New threads MUST INCLUDE PICTURE.

:)

[squidburn]

Image now inserted in original post ... my apologies

[l.e.b]

I don't really understand it, im not a newspaper reader
The font is really annoying
And the lettering takes up too much of the box
It also looks like youve only done 3 drawings of the main character and pasted him again so its difficult to tell nething by his emotions
Apart from that its pretty boring

[squidburn]

Right you are: only three drawings of the main character = The work represents a two-dimensional character who displays a short range of emotions. It plays off minimalism. But what kind of font would be better suited for this work? Any suggestions?