Fan art of FF7-AC

[albert0731]

After seeing the DVD
i got inspired and then painted this pic.
(honestly,
i personally think that the motions are way too fancy & confusing.)

http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/9618/proto10co.jpg

and then here are
http://home.pchome.com.tw/art/chaosmic/TIFA.png
TIFA
and
http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/2931/yuffie9jv.png
YUFFIE

hope you guys will like it.

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C&C are fully welcomed :wink:

[N D Hill]

GAH! LENSFLARE! IT BURNS!!

Seriously, you have a good piece going. Nice comp. Decent line quality and perspective. But do not, I repeat, do not muddy it up with something that looks so blatantly artificial.

[albert0731]

GAH! LENSFLARE! IT BURNS!!

Seriously, you have a good piece going. Nice comp. Decent line quality and perspective. But do not, I repeat, do not throw muddy it up with somethiung that looks so blatantly artificial.
AGREE!

this is the first time i use LensFlare. maybe this will be the last time also.

i just want to see the effect caused,
but it seems to have more side effects rather than bonus points.

thanks for your crits anyway man. a slap across the head.
the pic is already replaced.

[Mort]

today i had cornflakes.

[L. Scott Knight]

Nice, I like it. Are these two friends or are they fighting?

[Madfishmonger]

I like the movement in it, actually, the game has a lot of that anyway. The poses are interesting too, the point of view is good. For some reason, though, Yuffie's mouth ad eyes bother me. It looks...unfinished? Her eyebrows look a bit high, and her mouth needs to be doing something, I think, it's almost hidden. Totally LOVE her boots, though. Glad you took out the lens flare too. Good colour and shading and all that, just Yuffie's face that's somehow not right to me. Of course, that's just me :)

[CamStatic]

Wow, looks awesome.
One thing though; maybe you should give them a bit more "expression"? They look a bit... expression-less due to the situation. Hard to explain. o.o;;

[tgfx]

cool...

[JoshuaTheJames]

Fun Piece..

I commend you for tackling difficult poses But...

If you're going to show the 'Money Shot' Know how the pieces fall together. Her 'sensitive area' seem too far forward to her front. Making some be reminded of sagging male genitals. Again it mostly seems that way because the area seems too far forward(towards her front).


Thanks for sharing,
-Joshua

[asoir]

Making some be reminded of sagging male genitals.
-Joshua

Haha, hit the nail right on the head.
I agree with the crit on the expressions too, they're smiling, but it still looks blank.

[Surfeit]

Good piece--very playful. The clouds frame the characters nicely. There's just one thing about the perspective that breaks the believability for me. This is difficult to explain, but here goes:

Tifa's extremely distorted foreshortening is appropriate because of our close point-of-view to her, so you are right to make her extended foot really big in relation to the rest of her body. Yuffie, however, is farther away from the "camera," so the apparent size increase of her foreshortened feet relative to her head wouldn't be as extreme. I found a better explanation of this phenomenon in David Chelsea's "Perspective for Comic Book Artists."