citiy 4 iritor online again

[amoe]

hi every1 again

i started this pic 2 days ago and i guess it will take 100 years to finish it.

i hope u like what u c so far.

c&c are wellcome

http://www.iritor.com/~amoe/overview.jpg

-amoe-

[amoe]

http://www.iritor.com/~amoe/overview02.JPG

here is a little update... i hope it got better...

[killing.people]

it got better.

[amoe]

oky... another update

http://www.iritor.com/~amoe/overview03.JPG

-amoe-

[Irate Customer]

I really like the foliage at the waterfall, it is really starting to come to life. One thing I keep thinking is that the city itself is tilting to the left. I am not sure if it is a perspective issue, or if I am missing something.

I love the colors you are using as well.

Irate

[amoe]

i know i fucked up the perspective on the city a bit. maybe i ll fix that later...

thanx

-amoe-

[Irate Customer]

Rotate the image a few degrees clockwise ;)

Anyway, I really like the waterfall. I keep going back to that area to see what details I have missed.

Irate

[amoe]

another update...

well... i added more trees and some lakes and stuff...


http://www.iritor.com/~amoe/overview04.JPG

-amoe-

[amoe]

time 4 another update :)

http://www.iritor.com/~amoe/overview05.jpg

now it s time to think about the foreground... hmmmm??!?


-amoe-

[amoe]

oky... "almost done" he he he

i hope i can finish it on monday...

nice weekend everyone...

http://www.iritor.com/~amoe/overview06.JPG

-amoe-

[usagi yojimbo]

whoa damn man, thats looking awesome
maybe a bit more highlights/conrtrast would make it a bit better? i dunno

[kasai]

This is comin along pretty darn nicely. Cant wait to see it finished.

[ghobii]

You really should fix the big problems before continuing to add detail. It's a bad habit that is easy to fall into. I think you just need to adjust the ring around the city. Like Irate customer said, it needs to be rotated, that is, the "points" of the ellipse need to be adjusted like, 5-10 degrees clockwise.
Fix it now, it's driving me crazy:eek:

[midnightsun13]

that is completely awsome man but i agree the city is tilted to the left maby u shud put it on the edge of a cliff that might give it a reason lol just kidin fix the noticeable things first:evilbat:

[killing.people]

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/crit00001.jpg

i think your perspective is confused. maybe this paint over would help.

the second image is a way you might e able to help it and touch up around the fixes.

i first selected around the pentagon. then turned it a slight degree.

then selected the top half and squashed the back side of the structure down.

hope this helps more than frusterates.

-killing

[killing.people]

i think it might help to add to the top of the canvas to make it feel more open, the tree conjests, or closes in on the composition. maybe you could add a space station far into the atmoshpere, or a shuttle streaking the sky above.

[amoe]

wow...

thanx 4 the c&c and thanx 4 the overpaint.

-amoe-