an elf and a sorceress

[DustinTrimble]

A few inked drawings I did recently, an elf warrior and human sorceress.
http://www.geocities.com/xstin2000/bwdemo.htm

Comments welcome, thanks!

[El Chief]

hi. the lineart looks fine. just one thing, i think the hand of the elf is to big for an elf. may be appropriate for a human. that's what i thought, so don't bother :)

greets

[Severith]

Try to practice more on the anatomy..

Crits

First Pic: the breasts of the guy are a bit deformed also the right is bigger than the left one..

Second Pic: The legs are a bit weird... incase the line shading is totally off there..., and indeed El Chief was right with the hands maybe a bit smaller...

[DustinTrimble]

Thanks guys for the crits.

El Cheif: Yeah the hands came out a little big on him, though I didn't know there was a difference between elf hand proportions and human ones. I was thinking "Barbarian Elf" when I drew him, though didn't have any particular reference. I did some photocopying today of african armor and such, hopefully I will get some inspiration going tonight.

Severith: Yeah I practice when I can, yeah his pecks are big and not symetric, but they work to build the big upper body, thus giving him a strong heroic shape. On the chick:Weird legs okay, you probably mean weird folds? her legs are beneath the dress. Yeah I am still trying to learn more abought clothes folding, and am expirementing, and this wasn't the best outcome. IMO a lot of people tend to just want to focus on anatomy, but anatomy is just a force in a lot of causes, and the structure of anatomy is often shrouded. Smaller hands? maybe, it's hard for me to do petite delicate fingers, and haven't yet made that a priority. Right now I am focusing on legs, and learning about folds, with a little focus on trying to get shapes somewhat interesting.