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[stan]

hey all.. feel free to crit
http://www.instituteofmedia.com/stanley/sketchdump/35.jpg

[Happeh]

Is the codpiece nailed on? ;0

[stan]

really wished i got a crit on this... not some dumb comment....

[harrigton]

Good Job, i really like it. Maybe he could use a few more hilights along his lower body but other than that your coloring is top-notch. Nice background too. It reminds me of Arnistotle

[tyboogie]

nice character--good drawing/painting

the area where the yellow BG meets the red on our left is distracting/ detracting from the character---
my eye kleeps going to that earea because of the intensity of the yellw and the evergy of strokes where it blends into red



teh upper right is more successful as an ambigious BG

good shit--keep it up--and keep posting!!!!!!!!!!!!!1----ty

[tyboogie]

also look at left hip area-( our left)--too generalized

and the cloth stretches where the cod piece is creating tension on the paint is a little weird

[dajovion]

I agree about the cod piece. Too much tightness around there. It looks like it's gripping too tightly. I think it draws too much attention. I love the coloring around his face. It's nice and soft. I would suggest doing the same to the rest of his body instead of having a looser stroke. I think that would help this piece out a lot. Great job!

[mushuhaha]

Stan~
Yes! Great drawing, but the bottom part of the image needs some more work, like the coloring on his gloves and the sword handle. They lack the contrast the rest of the image has. Good job and you have a really cool web design. When will your web page be fully launched?

[stan]

thanks for the comments... at first i was discouraged at posting here since i didnt get much crits... the crits have been really helpful=) thanks again.
mushahaha- what website?

[navel_lint]

i like it!

but i would never want to find myself in that outfit.
ouch! that metal cup has got to hurt like hell!