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[CrazyfingerS]

Hey guys.I figured this was the best place ot come for advice.this is a cover i,m working on and i,m a bit lost as to how to wrap it up.i have a few light issues with the children that i am addressing and with the background in general but any observations you guys could help me out with would be greatly appreciated.

Right here. (http://photobucket.com/albums/a309/seanvrabel/Italy%2005/Art/?action=view&current=folccov22procopy.jpg)

[MikeMakesModels]

I think that is quite a striking image. I really like it.
Sorry I can't be more constructive but it looks to me like you're on the right lines. I'd just be careful not to over-engineer it.

[madster]

This piece just looks really odd with some of the rendering choices you have made...

The "leg warmers" on the man look goofy, and the overly emphasized creases surrounding his crotch look like someone has yanked the top of his pants up to his armpits. His front hand looks knarled and odd.

The children look too tall and disproportional to be children, and the giant orange shoes on the frontmost one are lumpy and visually unattractive. The boy in the yellow shirt is terribly out of proportion between the top of his body and the bottom.

The parade of children in the background shouldn't be shoved off to the side, as they help to define what this picture is all about. I would move the entire thing over to the right, as the majority of the "action" is currently falling off the left side of the page.

~M

[nikotem]

Yeah, I like it too, also the fifth picture (I see them all), the thing with hornes. I think that the guy's legs are little short, and the kid in the background (is that a hair?), I cannot see his face or head, or it is not done well. This is it if I am concerned... the rest I like it much, espetially the atmosphere (nice colors).

[CrazyfingerS]

Dunefish-Thanks alot,i'm glad you like the peice,and yes one of my bad habits is to over articulate when i color.thanks for the kind words.

Madster- thanx

Niko-Thank you for the comments.,i will certainly look into what you said.